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Sharp headline and clever proof-by-demo, but the body sprawls into three products at once, diluting the one-field simplicity the above-fold experience promises.
“In 90 seconds you'll see the sentence that's losing visitors — and the rewrite that fixes it.”
Protect this specificity when you write any email, ad, or onboarding step — the moment you soften it to 'get insights fast' or 'improve your copy,' the dare disappears. Consider pulling the '90 seconds' and 'the sentence' framing into the scan flow itself so the product experience confirms what the headline promised.
Get the ship-ready rewrite →Most B2B SaaS tools at the pre-launch stage ask solution-aware buyers to 'start a free trial' — which reads as 'invest time to maybe learn something.' This subheadline collapses that perceived cost by naming a specific artifact (one...
Not five scoring areas. Five questions, asked in sequence. The page is judged on how many it answers before the visitor gives up.
“In 90 seconds you'll see the sentence that's losing visitors — and the rewrite that fixes it.”
“Leaderboard comparisons against Stripe (9.2), Superhuman (8.6), Linear (8.4), Notion (8.2), Framer (7.6), Vercel (7.4), Loom (7.4), Intercom (6.9), HubSpot (6.4)”
“Find What's Costing You Conversions | In 90 seconds you'll see the sentence that's losing visitors — and the rewrite that fixes it. | Scan Free”
Every finding named, quoted, and paired with the rewrite — that’s how Lytms reads a page. Run it on your own site to see all of yours, free.
Proof architecture, named-customer recognition, imagery authenticity, claim-vs-evidence gaps.
Hero value, conversion-killing sentences, cliché density, awareness fit, buyer-language gap, competitive differentiation.
A live feed of what the category is moving toward, with a drafted response for the moves worth responding to.
Pick one competitor on Pro. Same scoring this page is held to. Same-day alert when they ship a homepage change.
Mine reviews, transcripts, support, social. Ranked, attributed, matched against the homepage.
Accept, edit, ship. An action queue tied to a CMS or copied straight to clipboard.
Lytms reads any B2B homepage the same way — verdict, five scores, every line that costs the visit. Free to run. Full report and drafted rewrites on Pro.