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The page buries the yield rate finance controllers need behind placeholder dashes while leading with a tagline.
“$15/mo/user + Platform fee based on team size”
Add at least a bracketed range or a small table showing what the platform fee looks like at 25, 100, and 250 seats. Buyers don't need a precise quote — they need enough to know whether to keep going.
Get the ship-ready rewrite →Your Plus page shows a per-user price, then adds "+ Platform fee based on team size" with no number, no table, no example. Finance controllers — the people who sign off on tools like this — are trained to find the real number before...
Not five scoring areas. Five questions, asked in sequence. The page is judged on how many it answers before the visitor gives up.
“Customer logos are available (detected in context) but none appear on the pricing page. The only proof signal is '50,000+ finance teams have saved millions of hours' — a volume claim already flagged in surfaced findings. No named companies, no quotes, no role-specific testimonials appear anywhere on the page.”
“Earn -.--% * in a Ramp Investment Account; Earn -.--% * on cash in a FDIC-insured account”
“$15/mo/user + Platform fee based on team size”
Every finding named, quoted, and paired with the rewrite — that’s how Lytms reads a page. Run it on your own site to see all of yours, free.
Proof architecture, named-customer recognition, imagery authenticity, claim-vs-evidence gaps.
Hero value, conversion-killing sentences, cliché density, awareness fit, buyer-language gap, competitive differentiation.
Call-to-action clarity, visual weight, offer strength, form friction, CTA-to-page match.
A live feed of what the category is moving toward, with a drafted response for the moves worth responding to.
Pick one competitor on Pro. Same scoring this page is held to. Same-day alert when they ship a homepage change.
Mine reviews, transcripts, support, social. Ranked, attributed, matched against the homepage.
Accept, edit, ship. An action queue tied to a CMS or copied straight to clipboard.
Lytms reads any B2B homepage the same way — verdict, five scores, every line that costs the visit. Free to run. Full report and drafted rewrites on Pro.