The page answers "how much" but never answers "visibility into what's happening across the team" — the reason buyers are here.
“Customer logos are detected on the site but do not appear on the pricing page. The only social proof is 'Trusted by more than 25,000 companies' — an...”
Pull 6–8 recognizable customer logos from elsewhere on the site and place them directly below the tier grid, above the feature comparison table. Pair with one attributed quote from an engineering leader if reviews on aggregators contain usable language.
Get the ship-ready rewrite →The page has customer logos available but none appear here. The one proof signal on the page is a headcount with no names attached — and the logos that could fix that are sitting elsewhere on the site.
Not five scoring areas. Five questions, asked in sequence. The page is judged on how many it answers before the visitor gives up.
“Customer logos are detected on the site but do not appear on the pricing page. The only social proof is 'Trusted by more than 25,000 companies' — an unattributed aggregate. Engineering leaders evaluating a Jira replacement want to see who else made this call, not a count.”
“Import and export [listed as a Core feature across all tiers with no source detail]; Migration & onboarding support [Enterprise only]”
“The feature comparison table has 40+ rows across four columns. On mobile viewports, this renders as a horizontally constrained grid that requires horizontal scrolling or collapses in ways that make column-to-column comparison impossible. No mobile-specific summary or collapsed view is indicated in the visual notes.”
Every finding named, quoted, and paired with the rewrite — that’s how Lytms reads a page. Run it on your own site to see all of yours, free.
Proof architecture, named-customer recognition, imagery authenticity, claim-vs-evidence gaps.
Hero value, conversion-killing sentences, cliché density, awareness fit, buyer-language gap, competitive differentiation.
Destination coherence, mobile rendering, performance, accessibility.
A live feed of what the category is moving toward, with a drafted response for the moves worth responding to.
Pick one competitor on Pro. Same scoring this page is held to. Same-day alert when they ship a homepage change.
Mine reviews, transcripts, support, social. Ranked, attributed, matched against the homepage.
Accept, edit, ship. An action queue tied to a CMS or copied straight to clipboard.
Lytms reads any B2B homepage the same way — verdict, five scores, every line that costs the visit. Free to run. Full report and drafted rewrites on Pro.