LYTMS
The /ai URL is a marketing claim with no marketing page behind it — just a login wall.
“Your AI workspace.”
Swap it for something that names what Notion AI actually does inside the workspace — not a category label, but a concrete job. The differentiation you have (AI inside the tool where your team's knowledge already lives) is real; the headline just doesn't say it.
Get the ship-ready rewrite →This is the first thing someone reads on the page, and it could have been written by Microsoft Copilot, Google Gemini, or any other AI product that launched in the last two years. For someone who already uses Notion and is deciding...
Not five scoring areas. Five questions, asked in sequence. The page is judged on how many it answers before the visitor gives up.
“Your AI workspace.”
“No path to explore AI features; 'Your AI workspace.' headline leads directly to 'Continue' (login) or 'Sign up' with nothing in between.”
“Use an organization email to easily collaborate with teammates”
Every finding named, quoted, and paired with the rewrite — that’s how Lytms reads a page. Run it on your own site to see all of yours, free.
Hero value, conversion-killing sentences, cliché density, awareness fit, buyer-language gap, competitive differentiation.
Call-to-action clarity, visual weight, offer strength, form friction, CTA-to-page match.
Proof architecture, named-customer recognition, imagery authenticity, claim-vs-evidence gaps.
A live feed of what the category is moving toward, with a drafted response for the moves worth responding to.
Pick one competitor on Pro. Same scoring this page is held to. Same-day alert when they ship a homepage change.
Mine reviews, transcripts, support, social. Ranked, attributed, matched against the homepage.
Accept, edit, ship. An action queue tied to a CMS or copied straight to clipboard.
Lytms reads any B2B homepage the same way — verdict, five scores, every line that costs the visit. Free to run. Full report and drafted rewrites on Pro.