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Strong logo bar and legitimate social proof buried under superlative-heavy copy that never commits to a single, quantified outcome before asking for the click.
“benchmarked as the fastest Postgres in the cloud”
Replace 'benchmarked as the fastest Postgres in the cloud' with a direct citation that names the benchmark methodology and links to a public results page — even a self-published but fully reproducible benchmark doc (hardware specs, test harness, raw numbers) restores evidentiary credibility far more than the current passive construction. At this stage, PlanetScale almost certainly has the internal data to publish this; surfacing it is reachable immediately.
Get the ship-ready rewrite →At series-c-plus, the ICP is platform engineers and database architects — precisely the audience that parses benchmark provenance before trusting a performance claim. The passive 'benchmarked as' construction names no methodology, no...
Not five scoring areas. Five questions, asked in sequence. The page is judged on how many it answers before the visitor gives up.
“We chose PlanetScale to host our most demanding Vitess and Postgres workloads, doing millions of queries per second on hundreds of terabytes of data. – Sualeh Asif, Chief Product Officer @Anysphere (Cursor).”
“benchmarked as the fastest Postgres in the cloud”
“Both our Postgres and Vitess databases deliver exceptional speed and reliability, with Vitess adding ultra scalability through horizontal sharding.”
Every finding named, quoted, and paired with the rewrite — that’s how Lytms reads a page. Run it on your own site to see all of yours, free.
Proof architecture, named-customer recognition, imagery authenticity, claim-vs-evidence gaps.
Hero value, conversion-killing sentences, cliché density, awareness fit, buyer-language gap, competitive differentiation.
A live feed of what the category is moving toward, with a drafted response for the moves worth responding to.
Pick one competitor on Pro. Same scoring this page is held to. Same-day alert when they ship a homepage change.
Mine reviews, transcripts, support, social. Ranked, attributed, matched against the homepage.
Accept, edit, ship. An action queue tied to a CMS or copied straight to clipboard.
Lytms reads any B2B homepage the same way — verdict, five scores, every line that costs the visit. Free to run. Full report and drafted rewrites on Pro.