Your hero promises a new category; your proof section defends whether your logos are real customers.
“The new way to build products”
Pull your actual wedge into the headline -- something about being the one platform built for both humans and AI agents, or consolidating all your product tools in one place. The subhead is already doing the heavy lifting; let the headline earn its spot by naming who this is for and what's genuinely different.
Get the ship-ready rewrite →This is the first thing your visitor reads, and it tells them absolutely nothing. 'New way to build products' is a phrase that could belong to Amplitude, Figma, Linear, or a random no-code tool -- there is zero differentiation here. Your...
Not five scoring areas. Five questions, asked in sequence. The page is judged on how many it answers before the visitor gives up.
“The new way to build products”
“Cumulative Layout Shift 0.51 (Core Web Vitals "poor" threshold: 0.10). Source: crux. All poor metrics: CLS 0.51.”
“axe-core flagged 5 elements with rule "button-name" at critical impact. Example selector: #radix-\:r1\:. 4 blocking rules total, 14 offending nodes.”
Every finding named, quoted, and paired with the rewrite — that’s how Lytms reads a page. Run it on your own site to see all of yours, free.
Destination coherence, mobile rendering, performance, accessibility.
Hero value, conversion-killing sentences, cliché density, awareness fit, buyer-language gap, competitive differentiation.
A live feed of what the category is moving toward, with a drafted response for the moves worth responding to.
Pick one competitor on Pro. Same scoring this page is held to. Same-day alert when they ship a homepage change.
Mine reviews, transcripts, support, social. Ranked, attributed, matched against the homepage.
Accept, edit, ship. An action queue tied to a CMS or copied straight to clipboard.
Lytms reads any B2B homepage the same way — verdict, five scores, every line that costs the visit. Free to run. Full report and drafted rewrites on Pro.