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Your page promises buyer-voice clarity while its own proof section has no named buyer, no outcome, no number.
“"[Company] drafted their name onboarding overhead in the sub-headline: Variant: [Y results] also quantified outcomes from [X phrase, not Y page]"”
Keep the anonymization, but replace the bracket placeholders with real numbers and real phrases — even scrubbed ones. 'Onboarding overhead appeared in 1 in 4 competitor reviews; the variant using that phrase lifted click-through 18% in 7 days' is anonymous and specific. '[Y results]' is neither.
Get the ship-ready rewrite →The bracket placeholders in your 'real-shaped examples' section make them look like a Figma mockup that never got filled in. At Series-A, anonymized examples are fine — but anonymized examples with literal '[Y results]' and '[X phrase,...
Not five scoring areas. Five questions, asked in sequence. The page is judged on how many it answers before the visitor gives up.
The page is built to explain Audience Intelligence to someone who already believes buyer-voice misalignment is their problem.
▸ Read the full takeCollapseBut the visitor arriving at this URL almost certainly doesn't start there — they arrive because they're trying to fix a homepage that isn't converting, not because they've diagnosed the root cause as vocabulary divergence. The hero jumps straight to the mechanism ("your buyer's vocabulary, scored against your page's vocabulary") without first naming the situation the buyer is actually in: a page that feels right to the founder, gets traffic, and still doesn't convert. That situation — not the solution — is what earns the next scroll. Rewrite the hero around the problem the visitor arrived with; let the corpus framing follow once they've recognized themselves in the first two sentences.
The page describes four distinct capabilities — Mine, Map, Draft, and the LinkedIn voice signal — but never commits to one outcome the buyer should hold in their head when they leave.
▸ Read the full takeCollapse"The words your buyers use, mapped to the words on your page" is a mechanism description, not an outcome. The four real-shaped examples each demonstrate a different payoff: a hero rewrite, a comparison page, a LinkedIn post, a pricing page variant. The buyer finishes the page having seen a product that does many things, none of them owned. The "How it pays for itself" section gets closest to an outcome claim — "conversion dropped 12% and you can't place why" is the most specific buyer situation on the page — but it appears six sections deep, after the buyer has already had to decide whether to keep reading. Move the post-launch cut scenario above the mechanism explanation; it's the sharpest articulation of what the product actually solves.
The page has no named customer proof anywhere.
▸ Read the full take“"[Company] drafted their name onboarding overhead in the sub-headline: Variant: [Y results] also quantified outcomes from [X phrase, not Y page]"”
“The first body paragraph is pure problem framing: 'Most homepages are written in the founder's vocabulary. Most buyers describe the same product in completely different words.' A solution-aware visitor already believes this — they came here because they believe it. The mechanism (Mine → Map → Draft) doesn't appear unti”
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Every finding named, quoted, and paired with the rewrite — that’s how Lytms reads a page. Run it on your own site to see all of yours, free.
Hero value, conversion-killing sentences, cliché density, awareness fit, buyer-language gap, competitive differentiation.
Proof architecture, named-customer recognition, imagery authenticity, claim-vs-evidence gaps.
A live feed of what the category is moving toward, with a drafted response for the moves worth responding to.
Pick one competitor on Pro. Same scoring this page is held to. Same-day alert when they ship a homepage change.
Mine reviews, transcripts, support, social. Ranked, attributed, matched against the homepage.
Accept, edit, ship. An action queue tied to a CMS or copied straight to clipboard.
Lytms reads any B2B homepage the same way — verdict, five scores, every line that costs the visit. Free to run. Full report and drafted rewrites on Pro.
The social proof line — "Lytms has scored 535 SaaS homepages by category" — is a volume claim about the platform's activity, not evidence that a specific buyer used Audience Intelligence and got a specific result. The four examples are explicitly anonymized. The leaderboard is public but the page doesn't quote a single person who used the corpus, found a gap, shipped a rewrite, and saw a number move. This is the page's highest-trust gap: a product that promises to fix messaging credibility has no named human on its own page saying it worked. One attributed quote — a head of marketing at a named SaaS company saying what changed after the corpus ran — would do more than the four anonymized examples combined.
The "What it doesn't do" section is placed mid-page, between the feature description and the worked examples, and it reads as a list of limitations rather than a trust signal.
▸ Read the full takeCollapseThe intent is clearly to pre-empt objections — the page is saying "we're not trying to replace your sales team's win-loss debriefs" before the buyer asks. But positioned where it is, the section interrupts the product story at the moment the buyer is deciding whether to keep reading, and it names four things the product can't do before the buyer has finished understanding what it can. Move this section to the bottom, near the CTA, where it functions as honest qualification for a buyer who's already interested — not as a speed bump for a buyer who's still deciding.