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The page demonstrates the product on Stripe and Intercom — but offers zero proof it has worked for a paying customer.
“The marketing intelligence platform for B2B SaaS”
Pull the actual wedge — the part about reading your page the way a buyer reads it and naming every sentence costing you the visit — up into the subheadline slot. That's the claim that separates you; right now it's buried in the FAQ.
Get the ship-ready rewrite →Your subheadline is the first descriptive sentence visitors read, and it says nothing Optimizely or VWO couldn't print on their own homepage. The rest of your page is genuinely specific — buyer corpus mining, same-rubric competitor...
Not five scoring areas. Five questions, asked in sequence. The page is judged on how many it answers before the visitor gives up.
The page has no proof that anyone has used Lytms and gotten a result.
▸ Read the full takeCollapseThe leaderboard shows Stripe, Intercom, and Lemlist scored by Lytms — but those are product demonstrations, not customers. The FAQ section, the pricing tiers, the Accelerate pitch, the "senior marketing operator" description — none of it names a single person or team who paid for this, ran a scan, and changed something on their page because of it. The page is asking a B2B SaaS marketing leader to hand over a domain and trust a verdict, and the only evidence it offers is the tool's own output applied to famous brands. That's a demo, not proof. Find one real customer — a name, a company, a specific outcome ("we rewrote the hero, rescanned two weeks later, score moved from 6.1 to 8.4") — and put it above the pricing section. One named result beats the entire leaderboard.
The page leads with a tool and buries the shift that makes the tool matter.
▸ Read the full takeCollapseThe hero says "Score your marketing. See what works. Fix what isn't. Ship what will." — that's a description of the product's mechanics, not a reason to care today. The four-section body (Page, Audience, Competitors, Claims) reads as a feature tour. Nowhere does the page name the specific situation the buyer is in when they land here: they've shipped a homepage, they know something is off, they don't know which sentence is the problem, and they don't have time to run a full audit. That's the shift — the moment when a marketing leader realizes their gut read on their own page is unreliable because they've read it too many times. Start the page there. The tool is the answer to that problem; right now the page skips the problem entirely and opens with the answer.
The page runs four pricing tiers and a managed-service offering simultaneously, and they don't share a single conversion path.
▸ Read the full take“The marketing intelligence platform for B2B SaaS”
“The audience scan section shows buyer phrases ('stopped the busywork,' 'actually gets adopted') mined from G2 and Capterra. None of those phrases, nor any direct reviewer quote about Lytms itself, appear in the page's social proof layer. The leaderboard shows other companies' scores, not Lytms customers' words.”
“See what works. Fix what isn't. Ship what will.”
Every finding named, quoted, and paired with the rewrite — that’s how Lytms reads a page. Run it on your own site to see all of yours, free.
Hero value, conversion-killing sentences, cliché density, awareness fit, buyer-language gap, competitive differentiation.
A live feed of what the category is moving toward, with a drafted response for the moves worth responding to.
Pick one competitor on Pro. Same scoring this page is held to. Same-day alert when they ship a homepage change.
Mine reviews, transcripts, support, social. Ranked, attributed, matched against the homepage.
Accept, edit, ship. An action queue tied to a CMS or copied straight to clipboard.
Lytms reads any B2B homepage the same way — verdict, five scores, every line that costs the visit. Free to run. Full report and drafted rewrites on Pro.
Free flows to Pro, Pro to Growth, Growth to Scale — that's a self-serve ladder. Accelerate is a done-for-you service starting at $399 for a positioning audit. These are two completely different buying motions aimed at two different buyers: the operator who wants a tool, and the founder who wants the work done. The page treats them as one audience and asks them to self-select by reading tier descriptions. The operator scanning for a tool will hit the Accelerate section and lose the thread; the founder who wants help will read four pricing tiers before reaching the service offer. Split the conversion paths above the pricing section — one path for "I want to run this myself," one for "I want someone to run it for me" — and let each buyer follow their own thread without reading the other's offer.
The page's strongest claim — that it reads your page the way a buyer reads it and names the specific sentence costing you the visit — is demonstrated entirely through examples applied to other companies' pages, never to the visitor's own.
▸ Read the full takeCollapseThe Stripe scan excerpt, the leaderboard findings, the inline examples ("Trusted by leading teams" → "The on-call tool 40,000 engineers open at 3am") are all third-party demonstrations. The visitor reads about what Lytms found on Rootly's page and Intercom's page without ever experiencing what it would find on their own. The free scan is the activation moment — the point where the product becomes real — but the page describes it rather than triggering it. The URL input bar is present, but it's competing with five sections of explanation above it and four pricing tiers below it. Move the input field to the top of the page, make the first action "paste your URL and see your score," and let the product demonstrate itself on the visitor's own homepage instead of on Stripe's.