LYTMS
Buyers land here asking which plan fits their team; the page answers with a category pitch they already believed.
“Five company names appear in the subheadline area with no headcount, no use case, no tier, and no link. A buyer evaluating whether to move their...”
Add one line of context per logo — company size, use case, or tier — or link each logo to a case study. Even 'OpenAI · 1,000+ employees · Business tier' changes how the proof reads.
Get the ship-ready rewrite →The logo bar — OpenAI, Figma, Volvo, Ramp, Cursor — does the minimum and stops there. Logos without context don't answer the question a buyer is actually asking: 'Do companies like mine use this at scale?'
Not five scoring areas. Five questions, asked in sequence. The page is judged on how many it answers before the visitor gives up.
“Five company names appear in the subheadline area with no headcount, no use case, no tier, and no link. A buyer evaluating whether to move their 200-person team off Confluence sees the same logos as a solo user signing up for Free. Neither gets the signal they need.”
“Each pricing card leads with a price and a CTA, then drops into a bulleted feature list. There's no one-line positioning statement per tier that names the buyer type ('For solo users who want to stay organized' / 'For teams shipping products together'). The visitor has to reverse-engineer their fit from feature names.”
“The headline is 'Notion Pricing Plans: Free, Plus, Business, & Enterprise' — a navigation label, not a value statement. The subheadline re-explains what Notion is. Neither line helps a visitor self-select into the right tier, which is the only job this fold has.”
Every finding named, quoted, and paired with the rewrite — that’s how Lytms reads a page. Run it on your own site to see all of yours, free.
Hero value, conversion-killing sentences, cliché density, awareness fit, buyer-language gap, competitive differentiation.
Call-to-action clarity, visual weight, offer strength, form friction, CTA-to-page match.
A live feed of what the category is moving toward, with a drafted response for the moves worth responding to.
Pick one competitor on Pro. Same scoring this page is held to. Same-day alert when they ship a homepage change.
Mine reviews, transcripts, support, social. Ranked, attributed, matched against the homepage.
Accept, edit, ship. An action queue tied to a CMS or copied straight to clipboard.
Lytms reads any B2B homepage the same way — verdict, five scores, every line that costs the visit. Free to run. Full report and drafted rewrites on Pro.