Your hero promises "all your teams connected"; four disconnected product launches below it prove the opposite.
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Add a second button in the hero — a 'Book a demo' or 'Talk to sales' path — so enterprise buyers who aren't ready to spin up a personal free account have somewhere to go. The self-serve button can stay; this is about not making consultative buyers dead-end.
Get the ship-ready rewrite →The hero offers exactly one path forward — a freemium signup — but the rest of the page is pitched squarely at ops and product leaders evaluating an enterprise platform. eBay as a reference customer, SOC 2 and HIPAA compliance, HyperDB at...
Not five scoring areas. Five questions, asked in sequence. The page is judged on how many it answers before the visitor gives up.
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“The possibilities are endless.”
“All your teams, all their workflows—connected in one workspace | Build AI-powered workflows that unify data, maximize collaboration, and set your teams up for long-term success. No code required.”
Every finding named, quoted, and paired with the rewrite — that’s how Lytms reads a page. Run it on your own site to see all of yours, free.
Hero value, conversion-killing sentences, cliché density, awareness fit, buyer-language gap, competitive differentiation.
Call-to-action clarity, visual weight, offer strength, form friction, CTA-to-page match.
A live feed of what the category is moving toward, with a drafted response for the moves worth responding to.
Pick one competitor on Pro. Same scoring this page is held to. Same-day alert when they ship a homepage change.
Mine reviews, transcripts, support, social. Ranked, attributed, matched against the homepage.
Accept, edit, ship. An action queue tied to a CMS or copied straight to clipboard.
Lytms reads any B2B homepage the same way — verdict, five scores, every line that costs the visit. Free to run. Full report and drafted rewrites on Pro.