LYTMS
Your hero commits to a product that doesn't exist yet on the page that follows it.
“Streamlined workflows to reduce timelines by 3x.”
Either tie this number to a real customer — name, company, role — or cut it. A real '3x' from a named team is powerful; a floating '3x' does more damage than no number at all.
Get the ship-ready rewrite →Every other quote in that section has a speaker behind it. This one doesn't — no company, no role, no context. It sits in a proof section dressed as a result, but it's just a claim. Enterprise evaluators who are already comparing you...
Not five scoring areas. Five questions, asked in sequence. The page is judged on how many it answers before the visitor gives up.
“The hero presents both CTAs at equal visual weight with no qualifier text, no role signal ('For teams of 50+', 'For enterprise'), and no copy differentiation. The page's own proof strip calls out Fortune 100 and YC companies — two audiences with completely different buying motions — but the CTA layer treats them identi”
“Streamlined workflows to reduce timelines by 3x.”
“AI Search $35/user AI Chatbot $20/user AI Meeting Notes $18/user AI Writing Assistant $20/user AI Email App $30/user AI Research $40/user Calendar Scheduling $15/user Team Wiki $10/user Project Management Tool $24/user Basic CRM $20/user Site Builder $20/user Forms $15/user | Monthly savings $0 Annual savings $0 | See ”
Every finding named, quoted, and paired with the rewrite — that’s how Lytms reads a page. Run it on your own site to see all of yours, free.
Call-to-action clarity, visual weight, offer strength, form friction, CTA-to-page match.
Hero value, conversion-killing sentences, cliché density, awareness fit, buyer-language gap, competitive differentiation.
A live feed of what the category is moving toward, with a drafted response for the moves worth responding to.
Pick one competitor on Pro. Same scoring this page is held to. Same-day alert when they ship a homepage change.
Mine reviews, transcripts, support, social. Ranked, attributed, matched against the homepage.
Accept, edit, ship. An action queue tied to a CMS or copied straight to clipboard.
Lytms reads any B2B homepage the same way — verdict, five scores, every line that costs the visit. Free to run. Full report and drafted rewrites on Pro.