Your hero commits to a product that doesn't exist yet on the page that follows it.
“Streamlined workflows to reduce timelines by 3x.”
Either tie this number to a real customer — name, company, role — or cut it. A real '3x' from a named team is powerful; a floating '3x' does more damage than no number at all.
Get the ship-ready rewrite →Every other quote in that section has a speaker behind it. This one doesn't — no company, no role, no context. It sits in a proof section dressed as a result, but it's just a claim. Enterprise evaluators who are already comparing you...
A buyer runs five checks before they act — in this order. Lose one and they never reach the next.
Not five scoring areas. Five questions, asked in sequence. The page is judged on how many it answers before the visitor gives up.
3 findings, surfaced. 6 more in the full report.
The page has two CTAs in the hero — 'Get Notion free' and 'Request a demo' — but nothing tells an enterprise buyer which one is for them.
“The hero presents both CTAs at equal visual weight with no qualifier text, no role signal ('For teams of 50+', 'For enterprise'), and no copy differentiation. The page's own proof strip calls out Fortune 100 and YC companies — two audiences with completely different buying motions — but the CTA layer treats them identi”
The page has a video in the hero that no copy sets up.
“Visual notes confirm a video play button in the hero section. No label, no runtime, no description adjacent to it. The surrounding copy sells AI agents in the abstract; the video's content and purpose are invisible until clicked.”
Your only hard metric in social proof has no source.
“Streamlined workflows to reduce timelines by 3x.”
You’ve seen 3 of notion.so’s 9 findings.
Your homepage has its own.
Every finding named, quoted, and paired with the rewrite — that’s how Lytms reads a page. Run it on your own site to see all of yours, free.
Call-to-action clarity, visual weight, offer strength, form friction, CTA-to-page match.
Proof architecture, named-customer recognition, imagery authenticity, claim-vs-evidence gaps.
Hero value, conversion-killing sentences, cliché density, awareness fit, buyer-language gap, competitive differentiation.
More than the rest of the report. Daily monitoring on notion.so.
Catch market shifts the day they happen.
A live feed of what the category is moving toward, with a drafted response for the moves worth responding to.
Pulse warms up after your first day on Pro.
A rival, scored daily, side-by-side.
Pick one competitor on Pro. Same scoring this page is held to. Same-day alert when they ship a homepage change.
The exact phrases buyers use about the brand.
Mine reviews, transcripts, support, social. Ranked, attributed, matched against the homepage.
Every fix routed to a queue, ready to ship.
Accept, edit, ship. An action queue tied to a CMS or copied straight to clipboard.
9 drafted fixes waiting
This is notion.so’s scan. What would yours say?
Lytms reads any B2B homepage the same way — verdict, five scores, every line that costs the visit. Free to run. Full report and drafted rewrites on Pro.